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 Post subject: THE EEVEE FACTOR its old but Ive made updates & additions!
PostPosted: 15th August 2009, 12:50 pm 
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Chapter 1: The Revelation
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... : "Callum WAKE UP!! CALLUM!!!!!!!"

Callum: "uhh..."

... : "Good you're finally awake, but do you know what time it is?!"

Callum: "Lucas... what time is it?"

Lucas: "It's 10 already! Come on!

Two Eevees, Callum and Lucas were at their house. Lucas, impatient as ever, was raring to go while Callum sluggishly got up
Callum: "uhh... What? 10 ?!?!? argh! we are gonna be late!"

Callum rushes out of bed and gets his treasure bag ready, fills it with max elixirs and various berries
Lucas: "Yes! Yes! now we can go to the Guild!"

Callum: "huh?! We're going to Dragonite's Guild?"

Lucas: "yep, thats right! Come on!"

Lucas & Callum rushed out of there 'house' next to Skyhigh Plains, where Dragonite's Guild was based. As they stepped in front of the entrance they noticed a weird bamboo grating

Exploud: "Hey, you two! Step on the grate!"

Lucas found it fiendishly difficult to step on to the grating, while Callum thought someone was going to tickle his feet

Luxray: "The footprint is Eevee's! the footprint is Eevee's!"

Exploud: "Hey You! Step on the grating!"

Luxray: "... uhh... Maybe Eevee... The Foot print is maybe Eevee's! The foot print is maybe Eevee's!

Exploud: "WHAT!?!?!? MAYBE EEVEE'S!?!?! You are a sorry excuse for a sentry, Luxray..."

Luxray: "I'm doing my best, after all that Pokemon's foot print is not a regular eevee's - it has 4 fingers and 1 thumb for example, rather than the regular three and his hind feet are shaped rather different..."

Exploud: "Drat... Well good enough, you don’t seem bad. You may ENTER!

A large metal gate heaved and made a horrible screech as it rolled up, Lucas and Callum wern't sure what to expect next. As they entered they saw two holes and a Pokemon climbed out of the left hole, it was a Grovyle

Grovyle: "ah, you two must be the Pokemon that are making the big fuss with Luxray and Exploud.”

Grovyle shakes the paw of lucas and then Callum, but the sensation he felt when he shook Callum's paw was rather familiar

Grovyle: "uhh... you don’t happen to be a hu-- a hu-- a ... never mind." (i'm sure i felt that sensation when me and Turtwig did the same thing when we vowed to stop Temporal Tower from collapsing, when i got rid of Dusknoir I thought I'd be gone for but I was transported to this time...)

Lucas: "We want to make an exploration team, Grovyle, are you alright?"

Grovyle: "of course, an exploration team, you say? And yes I’m perfectly fine! Now, this way, if you please!"

Callum: "Lucas, what do you think is wrong with Grovyle?"

As Lucas was wracking his brain for an answer he looked out a rather oddly placed window, although they were underground they could see Sky Fissure and were rather bewildered at what they saw.

Lucas: "Grovyle, were underground - how can we see Sky Fissure?

Callum: (that's... Sky Fissure...?)

Grovyle: "Hush now, we're on a cliff face, what do you think we'd see?

Lucas: "Oh, uh, I knew that!"

Grovyle: "we're here! Guild master Dragonite! Im coming in! You two - you must treat the guild master with the utmost respect you hear? Speak only when spoken to - do you get that? Good, here we go!"


Chapter 2: The Start Of Epic Exploration
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The large Dragonite-shaped doors swung open with a subtle creek and Lucas, Callum and Grovyle beheld a sight in which only the Dragonite Guild's members would see - a Dragonite with it's face stuffed full of perfect apples

Lucas: "uh... Grovyle, is he normally like this? Dragonite, I mean"

Grovyle: "Hush now! That is not the respect he deserves! Guildmaster! I have brought you Pokemon who wish to be explorers!

Dragonite:*scoff munch smack chew* "Well hello there! You wish to be an exploration team you say? Well what is the name of your Exploration team?"

Lucas: (eeuucchh, that's gross! Dragonite still has some chewed up apple in his mouth) "um... actually we haven’t thought of that yet! Callum, what should our team name be?"

Callum: "hmm... well maybe that? no, definatly not that... Ah ha! ‘Team Eeveelution’!"

Lucas: "Wow! That’s an amazing name! It suits us perfectly! That’s our name, Dragonite, Team Eeveelution!"

Dragonite: "very well then! Exploration team Eeveelution! Registering... GGGGRRRAAHHH!!!!!!!!! *poof* Done! Here, you can have this!"

Dragonite handed Eeveelution an explorer’s starter kit! Lucas thought this was an act of generosity and thanked Dragonite - he carefully opened the golden box. Inside he found a Badge, an Item Sack, a Viridian bow and a Lum berry.

Lucas: "Wow there is some amazing stuff in here!"

Dragonite: ”Yep! There sure is! Anyway, there is an assembly tomorrow morning so you better get some rest."

Lucas: "Ok, we'll do that. Callum! This is the very start of epic exploration! We have got to do our best!"

Grovyle:" I will escort you to your crew rooms - this way please!"

When Lucas and Callum got to their crew rooms they were amazed. They got a beautiful view of the sea and Luxury feather beds and a stream of water behind the beds.

Lucas: “yes, we better go to bed early tonight if we have to wake up early! What do you th--"

Whismer: "WAAAHHH!!!!! Dinner’s ready!"

Lucas: Hm? Tea! *grumble* wow! My belly growled! *grumgrumble* Ha! Yours did too! Let's go Callum!"

Everybody rushes to the mess hall to where whismer was shouting and they were greeted with sit-ran apples

*MUNCH CHEW SCOFF MUNCH CHEW DRIBBLE SCOFF MUCH MUNCH CHOMP CHOMP SMACK SCOFF CHOMP!*

...:*BURP!* "ooh that was nice! Whismer is doing extra good this week!"

Lucas: "well Callum! That was nice, was it not? Ooh... I’m full now..."

(Late at night)Lucas: "Callum are you awake? I thought so. Today was so exciting, I’m finding it hard to drift off... Never mind - I can get to sleep, I should because we've got to get up early tomorrow! Good-night Callum!"

Callum: (hmm... I’m finding it hard to drift off myself...)"good night Lucas!"


Chapter 3: Company Policy ___________________________________________________________________________________________



Exploud: “GRAAAAAHH!!! WAKEY WAKEY!!! RISE AND SHINE EVERYONE!”

Lucas & Callum: “Ow my ears…”

It was an early morning assembly and everyone was gathered together in the main hall.

Everyone: “1: Glee! 2: Ubiquitous! 3: Inquisitive! 4: Likeable! 5: Dragonite’s! – GUILD!”

Grovyle: “Chop, chop everyone, and get to work!
Ah! You two! Follow me!”

Grovyle took the two curious Eevees to the work room where every quest was listed – the boards were updated every 30 minutes and included criminals and misfortunes.

Grovyle: “You new recruits need to learn the basics: the badge you have – it lets others know you are a rescue team, and it lets you transport lost Pokemon safely back to Sky High Plains. Your Item Sack lets you carry (at the moment) a maximum of 20 items, you can expand the bag if the RTO, that’s the Rescue Team Organisation, sees fit.”

Lucas: “Wow! That’s a lot to take in! So why are we in this room Grovyle?”

Grovyle: “This is the “Work Room” as we call it – it lists all the criminals and all of the misfortunes!
For your first assignment! Let’s see… (Grovyle poured through the rescue board) Ah ha! Lets get you this one!”

“Client: Seviper
Job: Rescue Zangoose!
Info: Zangoose and I are rivals! I can’t do anything without competing! Please help!
Place: Thin Fissure B4F
Reward: ???”


Lucas: “So we need to get to Zangoose on the 4th floor of Thin Fissure, show the badge, and return here?

Grovyle: “Pretty much, yes. You’ll get the hang of it.”

Lucas: “Ok, Callum lets do this!”

Lucas and Callum took the short trek up to Thin Fissure, the destination of the request. They encountered some rampaging Aron, but nothing that they couldn’t deal with, they found Zangoose and returned to SkyHigh Plains.

Seviper: “Thank you so much for rescuing Zangoose!”

Seviper Gave team Eeveelution 2000 PoKé and a Pecha berry.

Lucas: “2000 PoKé? We’re rich!”

Grovyle: “Sorry, but its Company Policy for the teams to get 10% of the money…”

Lucas: “WHAT!? WE ONLY GET 200 PoKé!? THAT’S EXTORTIONATE!”

Grovyle: “Sorry, Company Policy.”

yes, this is that one a few topics down, but that was last years D: i have updated the original bit and added another chapter - the next chapter has been started, so no worries for next week, as it will definately be done, i beleive there are a couple of typos but nothing too bad (mostly the occasional ")

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BUMP :D
Ok, ive not posyed the next chapter, but i have recently had my room redone (still in progress) atm im on my laptop which doesnt have the files on it - so ill have to wait until we get some furniture!

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